Je dois faire un conte, genre féérique, en anglais et j'aurais besoin d'un peu d'aide.

Je suis en Seconde, et la prof d'anglais nous a demandé de faire un conte féérique. L'imagination n'est pas un problème, mais traduire en est un !

Je l'ai commencé, et j'aimerais savoir si mon texte en anglais est bien et si il y a pas trop de faute.

En français :

Il était une fois une princesse aux cheveux blonds, yeux bleu qui cherchait un prince charmant. Elle était différente des autres princesse, elle n’aimait pas les chevaux, ni les fleurs, ni la couleur rose. Elle avait décidé d’organiser un grand bal en invitant tous les garçons du château et des villages à coter pour rencontrer le prince charmant. Mais elle était très déçu: les garçons étaient laid, ennuyant, pas intelligent … Le lendemain, elle décida d’aller chez la sorcière, qui faisait très peur, et qui exauçait tous les vœux. La princesse lui a dit qu’elle voulait rencontrer le prince charmant, mais que tous les garçons n’étaient pas à son gout.

En anglais :

Once upon a time there lived a princess with blond hair, blue eyes looking for a prince charming. She was different from other princess, she did not like horses, or flowers, or the colour pink. She had decided to organize a tall ball in inviting all boys of the Cstle and the villages nearby to meet prince charming. But she was very disappointed : the boys were ugly, annoying, not intelligent. The next day, she decided to go to the witch, was very afraid and that granded all wishes. The Princess told him she wanted to meet prince charming, but that all the boys were not to his liking.

Once upon a time there was living a princess, with long blond hair and deep-blue eyes.Of course she was seeking for a charming prince, although she was very different form the other princesses : she didn't like horses, nature and flowers, or same the pink color.

One day, she decided to organize an outstanding ball, inviting the boys from all around the realm. She was sure to find her precious and charming lover. But all that she found was disappointment : boys were ugly, annoying and pretty dumb in the best cases.

So, the day after, she decided to go and see the witch, a very scary and terrifying creature, but who was able to grant all wishes. Our Princess told her about her dream to meet her charming prince, while no boy seemed to match her tastes.

(bon, en même temps mon anglais n'est pas des plus terribles^^)

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Once upon a time, there lived a blonde-haired, blue-eyed princess looking for a prince charming. She was different from other princesses, she did not like horses, or flowers, or the pink colour. She decided to organize a ball inviting all the boys from the realm to meet her prince charming. But she was very disappointed : the boys were ugly, boring and stupid. The day after, she decided to meet the very frightening witch who was able to grant all wishes. The Princess told her she wanted to meet her prince charming but no boy seemed to match her taste.

annoying = ennuyant = agaçant, pénible

boring = ennuyant = lassant, barbant, chiant