Devoir d'anglais

Bonjour, je m'appelle Manon.

J'ai besoin de votre aide à propos d'un devoir d'anglais demandé par ma professeure. Je doit écrire en environs 350 mot le voyage de mes rêves, avec qui etc. Il faut utiliser le futur et go + infinitif (j'ai pas trop compris le go + infinitif).

J'ai donc fait la rédaction en m'aidant de mes connaissance personnelles mais aussi de wordreference et de google trad (je sais que c'est pas bien).

Cependant, j'ai besoin de votre aide pour corriger les éventuelle erreur ! Merci d'avance, je vous met mon écrit ci-dessous.

The Republic of the Philippines is a country in southeast Asia made up of 7 641 islands. The trip would start in Manila but we would also visit several islands like Siargao, Bohom, the island of Negros and, it is in Palawan that we would end this magnificent trip.

I'm a little apprehensive about flying because I've never taken it before, but I'm sure it will be worth it!

During this trip we would like to discover many activities. We dream of doing a lot of boat trips where we would admire the magnificent landscape of the Philippines: white sand and turquoise water that reflected the sunlight, but also gigantic cliffs. This heavenly place would allow us, during these three months, to remove all the accumulated stress and forget the problems. We would like to have the chance to swim with majestic turtles and have a magical time! We also decided to take advantage of this trip to learn about surfing. I am sure that the many attempts will be catastrophic but, we would laugh a lot and could create unforgettable memories. I hope that the discussions with the locals will be enriching and will make it possible to establish precious links: I hope that even back in France we will correspond with our future friends from the Philippines. And, the food there seems to be excellent as well as the cocktails that I intend to enjoy lying on these wonderful beaches!

We also dream of diving and discovering the seabed covered with multicolored corals that would transport us to another world !

I can't wait to take this fabulous trip with my boyfriend and our friends, without whom this adventure would not be as magical! Now at night I only dream of blue lagoons, landscapes but also wonderful animals! In the meantime I am inquiring about this magnificent culture. I learned that the locals speak very good English so I hope my English will be up to par!

Est ce que l'énoncé ce n'est pas plutôt la forme future + infinitif genre "I will go to Manilla next year" ou "I will take my plane at Manilla's airport" ? 

Je serais toi je retravaillerais mon texte et j'éviterais google translate parce qu'il y a du vocabulaire, et peut être des formules, qui vont te trahir. En plus c'est le conditionnel et non le futur qui ressort le plus. Ce qui me semble cohérent si on te demande un voyage de rêve, mais qui ne correspond pas vraiment au futur.