Correction texte d'anglais

Bonjour à toutes et à tous,

Je suis actuellement en apprentissage d'employée de commerce et nous devons rendre un dossier en anglais.

Nous avons du écrire un lettre à un ami mais malheureusement nous doutons fortement de l'exactitude de l'othographe et de la grammaire.

Pensez-vous pouvoir m'aider à corriger ce texte?

Merci d'avance

TEXTE:

Dear Marisa,

I writing you this letter for your news and to say to you that I miss you enormously. I have so thing to tell you that I do not know by where to begin. I made a lot of progress in English. I him speak French as but I always take evening classes to the school Embassy these.

Soon 6 months when I arrived to New York and I feel as to me there. People are all very nice and welcoming. I am sure that you will like this city. This city is so big that you would have it breathlessly. Before going to work in the morning, I take my breakfast to Time Square with my colleagues. It is brilliant to begin a good working day. I like walking in the city and making a shooping. You look store you would want quite bought

During my stay I was able to see the statue of Liberty on the island of Liberty Island in the South of Manhattan. She is very impressive and I was even able to learn his history. I do not know if you know but she was offered by France, in sign of friendship between both countries. The statue of Liberty, besides being a very important monument of the city of New York, became one of the symbols of Etat-Unis it represent the freedom of the country

I am always amazed when I think in front of the empire state bulding. This building is so big that it looks like it affects the sky. It is 381 meters and in 102 floor. It is at present the biggest building of the city of New York. I also belonged to Ground zero, the place where were the Twin Towers. This place is cold in the back. Just in passing in front of we feel of the sad and we one thought in of people who died in this accident

In spite of every his beautiful landscape, his dream shops, my exceptional life. I miss you you and the others. I hope that you will soon visit me

Miss you

Mendy

Voilà, il y a certainement d'autres corrections à faire, je ne suis pas bilingue :

Dear Marisa,

I'm writing you this letter to get some news and to say that I miss you a lot. I have so much things to tell you that I do not know where i should begin. I made a lot of progress in English. I also speak French but I'm still taking evening classes in the school of the Embassy.

6 months ago, when I arrived in New York and I feel as to me there (je ne comprends pas cette partie). People are all very nice and welcoming. I am sure that you will like this city. This city is so big that it would leave you breathless. Before going to work in the morning, I take my breakfast in Time Square with my colleagues. It is so nice to begin a working day such a good way. I like walking in the city and go shoping. You look at stores, it gives you the wish to buy everything.

During my stay I saw the statue of Liberty on the island of Liberty Island in the South of Manhattan. It is very impressive and I even had the opportunity to learn about its history. I do not know if you're aware of this fact, but it has been offered by France, in sign of friendship between both countries. The statue of Liberty, besides being a very important monument of the city of New York, became one of the symbols of United States, it represents the freedom of the country

I am always amazed when I meditate in front of the empire state bulding. This building is so big that it looks like it affects the sky. It is 381 meters high and has 102 floors. It is, nowadays, the biggest building of the city of New York. It also belongs to Ground zero, the place where the Twin Towers were placed. This place is cold. Just by walking in front of it, we can feel the sadness and we have a thought for people who died in the accident

In spite of every beautiful landscape, dream shops, exceptional life, I miss you and the others. I hope that you will visit me soon.

Miss you

Mendy