corriger d'un texte en anglais

Bonjour,

Voici un diaologue que je dois faire en anglais pouvez vous me corriger mais fautes s'il vous plait ?

H. - Mom Mom!

L. - Yes?

H. - I tell you something important

L. - tells me that you’re not pregnant

H. - But no! - ', as it’s done in almost a year since I am with my boyfriend, well we decided to move all ^ ^'

L. - What ?

H. - Yes I leave homeJ then at least you and Dad can find everything you both in love:D

L. - No, but it is not possible, you do not know the washing machine,H. - I'll teach momL. - but even so, you keep me company, we laugh together well then it is not even a year you know your boyfriend

H. - I know, but I'm not going to stay until my 40 year old house I live my life and you have to understand meL. - darling? (No response) darling!

B. - yes?

L. - you heard the great idea of your daughter?She wants to leave the house!

B. - Let’s make a life, is no longer a child- H. - Dad's right, I'm not a kid

L. - you're able to take on your responsibility alone and be independent?

H. - Yes, Mom

L. - and how will you pay the bills? Therent?Food ?

H. - I'll find a job Mom. Remy will help me pay, he has a job

L. - "He works in what?

H. - He works in a pizzeria!

L. - Yes but you're still young to leave home

H. - I have 23 years old Mom!

L. - hmm I agree the only thing I want is you come once a week at home to visit me because I will miss your presence

H. - do not worry mom

L. - Just give me a hug. H. - Mom! (Soupir&Calin)

Correction avec quelques modifications: J'espère que ça te plait

H. - Mom Mom!

L. - Yes?

H. - I have something important to tell you

L. - Wait! Don't tell me you are pregnant

H. - Oh no! - ', It's almost a year since I have been with my boyfriend and we just decided to move ^ ^'

L. - What ?

H. - Yes, I will leave, so you and Dad can spend more intimate time together :D

L. - No, it is not possible, you do not know how to use the washing machine,

H. - I'll learn mom

L. - but even so you keep me company, we laugh together and it is not even a year since you know your boyfriend

H. - I know, but I'm not going to stay until my 40 years old with you. I want to live my life and you should understand me

L. - darling? (No response) darling!

B. - yes?

L. -Did you hear the great idea of your daughter? She wants to leave us!

B. - Let her make a life, she is no longer a child-

H. - Dad's right, I'm not a kid

L. - Are you able to take on your responsibility alone and be independent?

H. - Yes, Mom

L. - and how will you pay the bills? The rent?Food ?

H. - I'll find a job Mom. Remy will help me to pay, he has a job

L. - "He works in what?

H. - He works in a pizzeria!

L. - Yes but you're still young to leave home

H. - I'm 23 years old Mom!

L. - hmm I agree but I want you to visit me weekly beacause I will miss you a lot

H. - do not worry mom

L. - Just give me a hug.

H. - Mom! (sigh&hug)

H. - But no! - ', as it’s done in almost a year since I am with my boyfriend, well we decided to move all ^ ^'

It's been almost a year since I started dating my boyfriend and we decided to move / I've been with my boyfriend for almost a year now and we decided to move.

H. - Yes I leave homeJ then at least you and Dad can find everything you both in love:D

Là, je ne saisis pas ce que tu veux dire.

L. - No, but it is not possible, you do not know the washing machine,

you can't use the washing machine, can you ? / you're not familiar with the washing machine, are you ?

H. - I'll teach mom

I will learn, mom.

L. - but even so, you keep me company, we laugh together well then it is not even a year you know your boyfriend

and you've been with/dating your boyfriend for less than a year / and it's still not been a year since you started dating your boyfriend

B. - Let’s make a life, is no longer a child

Let her live, she's no longer a child.

L. - you're able to take on your responsibility alone and be independent?

So you can be responsible and independent, can you ?

L. - hmm I agree the only thing I want is you come once a week at home to visit me because I will miss your presence

All I want you to do is come home once a week to visit me because I'll miss you. / I just want you to come home...

Merci beaucoup de votre aide :)

H : mom, mom

L: yes

H:i want to tell you something inportant

L: wait, tell me that you are not pregnant

H : oh no, it just passed almost a year since i was with my boyfriend and we just decided to move on.

L: what

H : we will leave , so can you spend more inimate time with us ?

L : no it's impossible , so do you know how to use the washing machine?

H : i 'ill learn mom

L :( i don't understand what you means by this sentence:but even so you keep me company ok), but a year is not enought , to know your boyfriend ...

H: i know but i can't stay with you until 40 years , i want to live ,and you should understand me.

L: darling

B: yes

L : did you hear the great idea of your daughter , she wants to leave us.

B: let her live, she's not a child

H: dad's right , i am not a kid

L: and can you takes the responsibilities, and be independent?

H: yes , mom

L : and how to pay bills, rent, food......

H : i'll find a job mom, remy will help me to pay, he has a job.

L: he works in what

H : he works in pizzeria

L : yes but you're still young to leave the home

H : i have 23 years mom

L: hmm , i agree but i want you to visit me weekly cause i will miss you a lot

H: don't worry mom

L : just give me a huge

H : mom......

I HOPE THAT YOU LIKE THIS ........

salut nari

t'as fait quoi au juste? tu as modifié ma réponse et même changé complétement le sens de certaines phrases rien de plus!!!

salut nari

t'as fait quoi au juste? tu as modifié ma réponse et même changé complétement le sens de certaines phrases rien de plus!!!

satul .......j'espere tu es bien ......

oui il me plait ton style c'est pour ca j'ai pris tes phrases et jai fait qulq modifications parsq je ne l'ai pas bien compris pas plus .........et pardon pour l'utilisation de t ' expression .

pardon.........