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My life has become hard and difficult since the loss of my wife and my son.

Life in Paris has changed. Taxes are increased and people ,who are unable to pay them, become victims of this unfair system.

Yesterday, and as usual I saw a crowd on the principal square .However, for this time things were different. There were well dressed men and women standing among fishmongers and wine merchants.

A man spoke when others roared. It was incredible. If everybody rebels, what will be our world tomorrow? I'm afraid that another massacre will happen. King prefers to kill rather than to discuss.

Today I regret .Perhaps life would have been different if I had listened to you. I know people think that I am crazy because I left my family but I made the right choice. Coming with her and being able to paint Paris was the best thing I did. I met many painters and writers who left their beautiful works too.

ps traduire mot à mot parfois fait perdre le sens de la phrase

donc utilise des mots simples

bonne nuit :blush:

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We have neither obligations nor reserve. It is different of all you know.

Many of them were in that place this morning. In that afternoon, three of them came home. During two month, they came every day to make me forget my sadness. I don't talk a lot since her death so I usually paint silently whereas they speak while painting. Today they were very excited. They talked about rebellion, discirmination and revenge against the king.

It was the first time they did. Since our painting night we often roared against monarchy and its bad life condition, but it was more of that.

If so many people are ready to go fight against armed guards, maybe I must so to go.

My dear brother, life here is hard. I have accomplished my dream to come here and to paint the most beautiful place. I have lived with a wonderful women and I meet great men. But la France dies. Peoples are starves and sick.

I made what I wanted make so I can help.

We probably die as those before us but maybe we can change just a little thing who can help the future generation.

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Dear David,

life is hard here. Since the death of my wife and my son, I have more and more difficulty to wake up every day.

Life in Paris changes. the King is increasing taxes and people who can't pay disappear with the guards. the City is angry.

Yesterday, I saw a crowd in the main place. It's not the first time but it was different this time. I saw men with beautiful clothes and ladies with elegant dresses in the middle of fishmonger and wine merchant.

A man was spoken during people roared. It was incredible. If everybody rebels, what will be our world tomorrow? I'm afraid that it a another massacre. the King prefers to kill than to discuss.

Today I thought about when we were young . My life would be different if I had listened to you. I know people think I am crazy to have refused the way of the family, but I have made the good choice. Go with her and be able to paint Paris is the best thing I could make. I meet many painters and writers who left an well-of world too.

j'ai mis en rouge les phrases dont je n'ai pas compris le sens.

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