Besoin d'aide en anglais !

Alors voila je doit faire un dialogue on je me dispute une amie mais le problème c'est que je pense heu non j'en suis sur que j'ai fait des faute Alors si une personne voit une faute un truc qui veut rien dire ou même encore des conseils dite le moi s'il vous plait !? ;D

Voila le dialogue :

• Hello!
• Hello, How are you .
• Good
• Ok! So, What movie do you want to see?
• I want to see an action movie !
• Oh..No , How would you like to go see a horror movie to change?;
• No I don't like a horror film !
• Ok.. but I don't want to see this film!
  
• Let's drop the cinema and eating out Japaness restaurent !
• Why not we'll eat at Chiness restaurent
  
• I can't stand, it's always you who chose
  
• Oh Really, Then you going to see you action movie and Japaness will eat and leave me alone !!
• No Problem ! Bye !!

I see no fault

Vraiment ?????????

Let's drop the cinema and eating out Japaness restaurent ! (Let's drop the cinema and eating out Japanese restaurant !)

Ok THANK'S !!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

de rien

Coucou ,

Tout d'abord je te conseille de donner des prénoms à tes deux interlocutrices. Et mettre un petite introduction.

Ensuite à la place de répéter Hello , tu peux mettre :

Amy and Gracy are going to the cinema.

* Hi Amy ( Par exemple )

* Hi Gracy , how are you today ?

Ne repond jamais good , dis plutôt :

* Fine , thank you.

* Ensuite tu peux mettre :

* Great , What sort of film do you want to see ?

* I want to see an action film.

* Oh it's too bad .. Would you prefer watching a horror film today , to change ?

* No, I don't like horror films.

* Okay .. but I don't want to watch this film !

*Let's drop the cinema .. Do you want to go out to eat Chinese ??

* Why not .

* I can't stand that , it's always you who choose all .

* Oh really , okay ..

Right , you go to the cinema and watch your horror film , and me I go to the restaurant to eat Chinese.

* No problem , bye !!

Voilà :)

*

-1 Putain

Lindsay59: C'est vrai c'est beaucoup mieux ! Je te remercie

Je ne suis pas sur du "how would you like to go see..." que j'aurais transformé en how about a horror movie? ou would you like to see a horror movie?

La réponse No i don't like horror movies pour dire que je n'aime pas les films d'horreur en général. Sinon I don't wan't to see a horror movie pour dire je ne veux pas voir un film d'horreur.

Je crois que let's drop pour laisse tomber est trop littéral dans notre traduction, j'aurais utilisé forget it (oublie ça)

Japanese et Chinese encore.

It's always you chose n'est pas bon... peut être you choose all the time.

Pareil pour la fin: then go to see your action movie, eat your japanese food and leave me alone.

Enfin no problem est acceptable mais il est dans un esprit d'accord, ce qui n'est pas l'esprit de votre conversation.

Sure i will!

De rien , tu es en quelle classe ?

• Hello!
• Hello, How are you .
• Good (or fine)
• Ok! So, What movie do you want to see? (which kind of movie would you like to see ?)
• I want to see an action movie ! (Action movie will be great !)
• Oh..No , How would you like to go see a horror movie to change?; (oh..no, what's about an horror movie to change ?)
• No I don't like a horror film ! (No, i don't like this type of movie !)
• Ok.. but I don't want to see this film! (Ok... but me, also, i don't like your proposal)
• Let's drop the cinema and eating out Japaness restaurent ! (Forget the cinema and have a break on a Japanese restaurant)
• Why not we'll eat at Chiness restaurent ( hmmm..Japanese, sure ?, don't want to try a Chinese one....?)
  
• I can't stand, it's always you who chose (I'm fed up, why i should always accept your choice ?)
  
• Oh Really, Then you going to see you action movie and Japaness will eat and leave me alone !! (Oh really ?, then, go to track your movie and eat Japanese and please, leave me alone)
• No Problem ! Bye !!