besoin d'aide en anglais

Bonjour!

alors voilà, je suis une vraie brèle en anglais, je suis en licence de comm et je devais écrire un texte pour me décrire et dire pourquoi je fais ces études.

Voilà ce qui en sort.

Si quelqu'unpeut m'aider, c'est vraiment chouette!

je m'attend vraiment au pire...

My name is ______ , I'm twenty. I live with my parents in a village in Isère.

At the high school, I was in a theatre class, so I've got the high school diploma in literature, option theatre.

After that, I try to do an "arts du spectacle" year in Grenoble but it didn't correspond with what I want. This year has been so hard for me because I wasn't integrate,

I love theatre and music, I had play theatre until next year. And I had play African percussions with a band for six years.

As the time passed, I realised that I prefered look the shows rather than participate.

It's for that I decided being organiser, mediator or, in every case, act for the artists and for the culture rather than an actor.

I dream to organise eclectics festivals, music, theatre, dance, drawing festival, I want to create a neutral place, when all deferents people are at ease. Some musics are unknown, so I would like that all people are equals facing the novelty who discover, together. I would like to create electro, jazz, rock, theatre, dance festival exclusively where regulars feel like at home, to go in an only direction, to be complete in one style.

All the same, I hope I still continue playing theatre with the band this year and why not start again the percussions.

I would like to learn to sew the leather too.

Merci de votre aide =)

Je crois que tu peux te corriger en allant ici

je peux chercher un mot dessus, mais pour un texte, c'est tout de suite plus compliqué, ça fait des phrases qui ne veulent rien dire parce qu'elles sont traduites de manière littérales.

Mais merci =)

At the high school, I was in a theatre class, so I've got the high school diploma in literature, option theatre.

Je crois qu'il vaudrait mieux se dispenser du the.

After that, I try to do an "arts du spectacle" year in Grenoble but it didn't correspond with what I have wanted.

Il faudrait mettre try au prétérit mais je pense qu'il faut changer do an "arts du spectacle" year aussi. Essaie de formuler ça différemment.

This year has been so hard for me because I wasn't integrated

De quelle année parles-tu ici ?

I love theatre and music, I had played theatre until next previous year. And I had played African percussions with a band for six years.

Je ne suis pas sûr que play theatre se dise. Tu peux dire I acted until previous year.

As the time has passed, I have realised that I prefer to look at the shows rather than participate.

It's for that That's why I have decided being to be an organiser, a mediator or, in every any case, to act for the artists and for the culture rather than instead of being an actor.

I dream to organise of organising eclectics festivals, music, theatre, dance, drawing festivals, I want to create a neutral place, when where all deferents people are would be at ease. Some musics are unknown, so I would like that all people are to be equals facing before the novelty who they would discover, together.

(...)

All the same, I hope I still continue playing theatre with the band this year and why not start again the percussions.

I will go on acting ou I still will act...

Je ne garantis pas avoir éliminé toutes les fautes ni ne pas en avoir fait moi-même mais ça doit être mieux comme ça.

wahou! merci beaucoup konvicted!!!!

je suis déjà bien plus avancée, c'est chouette =)

bonne soirée!